HMD the 10th: December!

[thelostmods]

You know what time it is, my friends; HMD MEME! The most dreaded meme in the lands of RP, but worry not, it is 100% optional here.

If you feel like you want clearer directions on what to do or if you're worried about your character's progress, please feel free to post here! Keep things constructive and play nice!


<b>YOUR NAME HERE</b> <b>Characters:</b> YOUR CHARACTERS NAME <user name="username"> ANOTHER CHARACTERS NAME? <user name="username"> <u>Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?:</u>

Comments

THE MODS

[thelostmods]

Any comments, questions, concerns?

Michi

[pythianjudgment]

MICHI
Characters:
Terezi Pyropepythianjudgment

Anything else? Still working on the speed thing. I think I'm better on that, now I just need to work on tagging out more, as far as I'm aware of. If there's anything else I should be focusing on, let me know!

Thalia

[scruffy_mcjackass]

Dustin Silver | OC | scruffy_mcjackass | Journal HMD

Speed's been suffering a bit this month, but hopefully the end of the semester will mean more time to catch up and get more involved. Other than that, just the general crit: Is Dustin consistent? Is his development reasonable? Is he still enjoyable to play with? Anything else about my writing that I could improve on?

[belongsontv]

Dustin is legit my favorite curmudgeon. You keep such a nice balance of grump, cockiness and brain power for him. It never feels out of line or sorts with him since he has a very distinct line of internal logic going on. With the kind of character he is, I can definitely see people somehow emphasizing one element over everything else, but you do such a great balancing act that nothing ever feels overpowering.

Archer

[collectivedata]

Journal/Dataku

How am I doing with this loser so far?? It's the first time I've played him in years, so if there's anything odd going on, please let me know! Thank you. <3

hullo i am a sora

[belongsontv]

Whilst my memories on all Riku's are fuzzy by this point, I have to say I really like seeing the differences you're putting into Data!Riku so far. You've really got the cocky early teenager elements down pat along with the awkwardness that would come from a AI sort of character.

hullo i am an archer

[cawsforalarm]

That's great to hear, thank you!! \o/ I'm worried about making him too cocky early-teenager, haha.

Rams

[dawnwardroad]

RAMS
Characters:
Riku dawnwardroad

Anything else?: My name is Rams and I'm bad at actually getting involved in events, um. Let me know if I'm slipping on characterization, though- I've been playing this Riku for three years now and he's developed noticeably different from canon.

[collectivedata]

hi facefriend

Anyway I really like your Riku! While I wasn't there for his Jarjammed development, he still sounds a lot like the 'ku we all know and love, though not exactly -- so I'd say you're doing fine. o7

Sora

[justshutupraz]

Sora
Characters:
Eddie Riggs kingroadie
Lili Zanotto justshutupraz
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: I'm technically on hiatus at the moment, but if you guys have any crit for either of my characters or if you've seen some slip ups grammar/spelling wise, please tell me!

Terri

[preuxchevalier]

Terri
Characters:
Bertie Wooster preuxchevalier
Zoe Washburne subtleserenity

Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?:
If there's anything I can do to improve your Wooster or Washburne experience, please let me know! For those who know the canons, please also feel free to let me know if I'm straying/have strayed too far from the original source.

[belongsontv]

I've never seen a drop of Firefly, but I adore Zoe. I just adore her CR with Lili so far and hope these losers continue their weird friendship.

and I always need more of Bertie interacting with my characters, 4 reals.

[preuxchevalier]

I'm really glad! Lili and Zoe's CR is some of my favorite, as well! And Eddie/Bertie weird friendship plus Lili/Bertie snarky children is always ace.

Re: Terri

[collectivedata]

I don't know Bertie at all, but having seen Firefly/Serenity, I can say that your Zoe game is incredibly on-point. Props to you. And of course, both of them are really fun to thread with.

[preuxchevalier]

Thank you! I'm really glad my Zoe sounds good. Are you bringing Mal for the 4th Wall event? You should bring Mal. Looking forward to when my guys thread with your Journal!

wrong account whoops

[cawsforalarm]

I didn't even think about that but yes I am bringing Mal. Please forgive me if I'm rusty and horrible.

[chalicejoker]

Airdra
Characters:
Hajime Aikawa chalicejoker
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?:
How did this month's Changeling shenanigans go down? Basically, I just want to make sure you're having fun with my tags, and if there's anything I could do to maximize the fun, let me know.

[preuxchevalier]

I always have fun with your tags. You provide excellent hooks to work with and just reading your threads are entertaining. I'm canonblind on Hajime, but he's always been a consistent and fun character. You've also been using Darkroach as less of a social crutch, which is great. Though I do still love our big, dumb bug.

[chalicejoker]

Aaaah, thanks so much! And it is very reassuring to hear that I'm being consistent, because he's AU'ed over in Save the Earth and I'd worry about bleed between the two with the AU differences and whatnot.

[inheavenslight]

AMANDA
Characters: Luce Blancos
YOUR CHARACTERS NAME inheavenslight
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?:

tell me anything yo

[belongsontv]

Not really direct crit- but a comment on some past crit you've gotten in this meme before. You've been really improving on adding action tags/some more introspection to your comments recently which is really helpful in keeping the thread rolling forward/gives a lot of nice context clues for the viewer to work off of. then again you and I have rp'd together for so long together I can kind of guess what your character means in their tone alone, lol

[collectivedata]

I LOVE LUCE(Y)

no really though I do. He's got a lot of personality even as an OC, and he's really engaging and fun to read! I've never actually threaded with him though, which is sad.

Lampy

[spitefulvitae]

Characters:
Natalie Waters (spitefulvitae)
Dakki Sigal (photonicfighter)

Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: As always, I am striving to get my speed up to a better place! I'm hoping to tag out a little more, too. Any feedback is appreciated!