Speed's been suffering a bit this month, but hopefully the end of the semester will mean more time to catch up and get more involved. Other than that, just the general crit: Is Dustin consistent? Is his development reasonable? Is he still enjoyable to play with? Anything else about my writing that I could improve on?
Thalia
Speed's been suffering a bit this month, but hopefully the end of the semester will mean more time to catch up and get more involved. Other than that, just the general crit: Is Dustin consistent? Is his development reasonable? Is he still enjoyable to play with? Anything else about my writing that I could improve on?