HMD the 10th: December!

[thelostmods]

You know what time it is, my friends; HMD MEME! The most dreaded meme in the lands of RP, but worry not, it is 100% optional here.

If you feel like you want clearer directions on what to do or if you're worried about your character's progress, please feel free to post here! Keep things constructive and play nice!


<b>YOUR NAME HERE</b> <b>Characters:</b> YOUR CHARACTERS NAME <user name="username"> ANOTHER CHARACTERS NAME? <user name="username"> <u>Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?:</u>

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Thalia

[scruffy_mcjackass]

Dustin Silver | OC | scruffy_mcjackass | Journal HMD

Speed's been suffering a bit this month, but hopefully the end of the semester will mean more time to catch up and get more involved. Other than that, just the general crit: Is Dustin consistent? Is his development reasonable? Is he still enjoyable to play with? Anything else about my writing that I could improve on?

[belongsontv]

Dustin is legit my favorite curmudgeon. You keep such a nice balance of grump, cockiness and brain power for him. It never feels out of line or sorts with him since he has a very distinct line of internal logic going on. With the kind of character he is, I can definitely see people somehow emphasizing one element over everything else, but you do such a great balancing act that nothing ever feels overpowering.