HMD the 14: August 2015

[thelostmods]

You know what time it is, my friends: HMD MEME TIME! The most dreaded meme in the lands of RP, but worry not, it is 100% optional here.

If you feel like you want clearer directions on what to do or if you're worried about your character's progress, please feel free to post here! Keep things constructive and play nice!


<b>YOUR NAME HERE</b> <b>Characters:</b> YOUR CHARACTERS NAME <user name="username"> ANOTHER CHARACTERS NAME? <user name="username"> <u>Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?:</u>

Comments

The Mods

[thelostmods]

zack

[amourtician]

ZACK
Characters:
JAY ZIMIN amourtician
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: how have I been doing since coming back?

As always, I'd like to know how Jay comes off so I can compare it to my intentions for him.

[escapedbird]

One thing I can definitely say, I really enjoy Jay. You've given him a very layered personality and convey world building information through his behavior/actions opposed to having him just tell us. I find that really refreshing since I see a lot of people just have OC's TELL us opposed to show us the differences between their world and ours.

I also enjoy how you can have him turn on a dime emotionally and it makes sense for the character. It never feels like you're doing anything for ic drama's sake when it comes to his behavior. Nor are you making fun of his flamboyance/general Jay-ness.

Keep up the good work. I wish i had more to offer, but you've kept him very steadily ontrack from what I've seen.

Sora

[justshutupraz]

Sora
Characters:
Lili Zanotto justshutupraz
Eddie Riggs kingroadie
Milla Vodello belongsontv

I also NPC Kelt- foreverfaceless

Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Any grammar, spelling or things akin to that? Any characterization problems?

[pythianjudgment]

MICHI
Characters:
Terezi Pyrope pythianjudgment
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Nop. Hit me with whatever.

[escapedbird]

aaahh, Terezi. My favorite nerd.

I wish I had actual crit to offer you, but honestly I just want to say thank you for playing such a well thought out and playful character like Terezi. You always know how to handle her more tender moments just as much as you do her trololo moments. You never hit too mean or too soft when it comes to how she behaves, unless its fully intended for a particular plot thread. Her tentative friendships, lack of emotional attachment to the Meadous itself and struggle to find herself is always fun to read.

I also wanted to thank you for being a co-mod with me, I genuinely am happy you and Terri are here to cause trouble with me. We all keep the ship that is this game running really smoothly and it makes me super happy. I probably yammer my happiness about it too much in private plurks, but I feel like you should keep hearing it. You guys r great.

10/10 would michi and terri again.

Airdra

[chalicejoker]

Airdra
Characters:
Hajime Aikawa chalicejoker
Torin radiantchicken
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: My main concerns are keeping characterization and development consistent, as well as whether or not y'all are having fun tagging them. Hit me with whatever!

Lampy

[spitefulvitae]

Lampdevil
Characters:
Natalie Waters Aikawa spitefulvitae
Jackson Isaka/Peacock Undead fusionjack
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Have my characters been consistently characterized? Are they fun to play against? Anything I could improve on?

[psycheslantern]

Bramble
Characters:
Psymagus Waspfire psycheslantern
Dolorosa Mornsong mourningnoonandnight
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Whatever you feel needs to be said? Effusive praise, vile recriminations, send it my way.

[preuxchevalier]

Terri
Characters:
Bertie Wooster preuxchevalier
Zoe Washburne subtleserenity
I'm also the main mod playing Zephyr divinefluff
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: How can I improve your experience with my characters?

[escapedbird]

I feel like I've said this before, but I'll say it again: I really enjoy the way you handle Zephyr. You give the bab child a lot of depth and complexity, and the flexibility to learn. You have cuteness there, but never over do it or play it up for a 'aww'.

I dig the complexities you've given our tiny widdle baby the fluffy child. Thank you for throwing so much care and weight into playing Zephyr. I feel like the change over was legit the best thing that happened in regards to Zephyr's characterization. (I will still be helping in a sitch when it comes to tagging of course!) I'm glad you're helping steer the ship of this silly game with me and Michi.

[notsoholyspirit]

Bizzy
Characters:
Spirit "Deathscythe" Albarn notsoholyspirit

Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: I'm just getting myself together, so really any feedback would be good. Anything good, bad or indifferent you've noticed I'd appreciate!