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wethelostooc2015-04-01 12:53 pm
thelostmods) wrote in wethelostooc2015-04-01 12:53 pm
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HMD the 12: April 2015
You know what time it is, my friends: HMD MEME TIME! The most dreaded meme in the lands of RP, but worry not, it is 100% optional here.
If you feel like you want clearer directions on what to do or if you're worried about your character's progress, please feel free to post here! Keep things constructive and play nice!
If you feel like you want clearer directions on what to do or if you're worried about your character's progress, please feel free to post here! Keep things constructive and play nice!
The Mods
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Characters:
Dustin Silver |
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: The usual--is Dustin still fun to play with? Consistent? Too melodramatic/not dramatic enough? Developing in an interesting direction? Does my writing need work? Anything else you think needs mentioning?
I also have a personal HMD on Dustin's journal, if you'd rather post things there!
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Characters:
Terezi Pyrope
Alice Cullen
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Has my activity improved? How are my characters' voices?
Terezi's been around a while and was starting to feel a little stagnant for me, but I'm hoping that getting her back into the community relations will pick that up again. Let me know if she's being too out-of-line or abrasive, etc.
Alice is an older muse that I haven't used in a while, so I'd like to know if her voice still sounds okay, etc.
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Characters:
Albert Heinrich
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: I know my speed's been lame but I'm trying to actually keep on top of things a little better now. It was mostly a release at work kicking my ass so it should be ok from here out. Otherwise, I'd really like to know if Albert is engaging and interesting to play with? Are there hooks in my posts/threads? How's his voice, if you're familiar with the canon? Let me know!
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Characters:
Karkat Vantas
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Anything for characterization? I know I was pretty dang slow for a while there and a few things got dropped, but I've picked up a lot and am doing better now.
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Characters:
Natalie Waters |
Dakki Sigal |
Jackson Isaka/Peacock Undead |
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: So, my activity has not been what it ought to be. If that's been an issue or a disappointment, please let me know! I do hope to get things together but I appreciate feedback and advice.
As usual, are my characters fun to play with? Are they flat or boring? Do I provide decent hooks to keep things going? Is my writing quality up to snuff? (I catch so many crappy typos when I re-read things, I hate it, ugh.)
All three characters have HMDs on their journals, too!
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Characters:
Hajime Aikawa
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Has Hajime been consistent? Have my tags given you enough substance to play off of?
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Characters:
Zhǐ Rén/Luke fon Fabre
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Am I interesting enough? Am I being too annoying with Luke? I'm trying to speed up my tagging because I know I've been ridiculous slow lately.
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Characters:
Jet Link
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: My activity hasn't been great the last while, so I'm going to try and pick that up this next month. Crit-wise, mostly I'm just concerned with entertainment/blandness, is he consistent, does he sound like he ought to, etc.
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Characters:
Lili Zanotto
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Any grammar issues, spelling mistakes? tense errors? Is Lili consistent and understandable?
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Characters:
Murai
Psymagus Waspfire
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?:
I know my activity hasn't been great the last few months and I'm trying to turn that around. Otherwise, I'm open to any crit you feel like tossing my way.
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Characters:
Bertie Wooster
Zoe Washburne
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?:
I got whacked with a real life stick recently and my posting speed has slowed substantially. Apart from this, if there's anything that I can do to improve your Wooster or Washburne experience, please let me know!