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The Lost Mods ([personal profile] thelostmods) wrote in [community profile] wethelostooc2014-10-01 10:40 am
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HMD the 9th!

You know what time it is, my friends; HMD MEME! The most dreaded meme in the lands of RP, but worry not, it is 100% optional here.

If you feel like you want clearer directions on what to do or if you're worried about your character's progress, please feel free to post here! Keep things constructive and play nice!


amourtician: (Default)

[personal profile] amourtician 2014-10-01 05:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Ira
Characters:
Jay Zimin [personal profile] amourtician
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?:

1. Is he consistent?
2. Is he sympathetic?
3. How does he come off, personality-wise?
4. Is he fun to play with?
5. How am I handling his fallout with Dustin and so on?
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[personal profile] preuxchevalier 2014-10-03 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
There are times during this fallout with Dustin that I've found Jay less sympathetic; mainly just thinking of his most recent thread in the pumpkin patch. That's down to something that's IC for Jay (a vindictive streak) and OOC knowledge (Dustin having been recently traumatized by Riku and the rest in the Mega-Prank thread as 'punishment' on top of what was handed down by the militia after the trial).

He's still definitely fun to play with and I do like watching him interact with people he doesn't like because it brings out his worse side.
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[personal profile] amourtician 2014-10-03 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
re: the first thing, yeah, i'm fine with that and i'm glad i'm still portraying him as someone with a very awful vindictive streak.

also thank you :>
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[personal profile] pythianjudgment 2014-10-01 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Michi
Characters:
Terezi Pyrope [personal profile] pythianjudgment

Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: I'm in a weird state between hiatus and slowatus right now, but I'm working my way back into activity as quickly as I can manage. I'd like to apologize to everyone for not wrapping up the Kite plot quicker. I really didn't mean for it to drag on so long. If there's anything characterization-wise that you'd like to crit me on, please feel free. Thanks, friends.
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[personal profile] thii2ii22tupiid 2014-10-01 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Maddin
Characters:
Holloway's Keep!SOllux Captor [personal profile] thii2ii22tupiid

Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: I just got here so...anything.
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[personal profile] scruffy_mcjackass 2014-10-01 07:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thalia
Characters:
Dustin Silver [personal profile] scruffy_mcjackass
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Did I handle trial/megaprank plots okay? Were they fun?

ONGOING: Following Lili's mind-jumping shenanigans, Dustin's had a very slight personality shift--not a change of perspective or values, necessarily, but a shift in expression. He's going to start keeping things to himself more often and intervene later rather than call people out immediately on things he sees as inefficient or stupid. There are good and bad points here; while he'll be less likely to lash out and accuse, he'll also be a lot more emotionally distant, and might let potential problems linger for longer than they should. I haven't played out this new personality much yet, but as I continue tagging Dustin out through October, I'd really appreciate feedback on how well I'm doing in keeping him IC during this change, or if there's anything I should add/modify to make the change more reasonable.
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[personal profile] justshutupraz 2014-10-01 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Sora
Characters:
Eddie Nein-Riggs [personal profile] kingroadie
Lili Zanotto [personal profile] justshutupraz
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Is my grammar, spelling, general language skills consistent? Even if I misspell out the wazoo in private, I try to keep my tags VAGUELY readable. If you noticed any problems please tell me! Along those lines, how do Lili and Eddie sound? Is their characterization still solid? Any tweaks I should make?

ALSO- did I handle Lili's mind jumping plot well? Do you guys have any particular crits about that or the like? For mod crit (about me in particular) hit up the first comment at the top of the post!
Edited 2014-10-01 23:45 (UTC)
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[personal profile] chalicejoker 2014-10-02 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
Airdra
Characters:
Hajime Aikawa [personal profile] chalicejoker
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: I cannot think of anything in particular this month, save that if I am doing things you are not having fun with, let me know! Fun: it's important.
Edited (good grief I was tired when I filled this thing out) 2014-10-02 01:50 (UTC)
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[personal profile] kingroadie 2014-10-02 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
This is less crit and like- commenting on something I noticed you improved on. You've really started pulling back from using Darkroach as much, which was a problem you were having for awhile due to Hajime's anti-social behavior. You've really improved on that front and I am giving you like a giant thumbs up over here!
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[personal profile] chalicejoker 2014-10-03 01:40 am (UTC)(link)
Good, good! I've been trying to keep more of an eye on that, glad to hear it!
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[personal profile] godsword 2014-10-02 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
Bramble
Characters:
Ammond Raidie [personal profile] psycheslantern
Murai [personal profile] godsword
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: God I dunno, I know I've been slowish lately and had some trouble carrying through on actually... participating in plots I'd expressed interest in... I'll try to be better about that. Anything else you want to bring up, this would be the place to do it. Come at me, bro. (or sis or other assorted siblings)
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[personal profile] photonicfighter 2014-10-07 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
Lampy
Characters:
Dakki Sigal | [personal profile] photonicfighter
Natalie Waters | [personal profile] spitefulvitae

Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: I've slowed down a little activity-wise, but I'm also trying not to bite off too terribly much RP-wise as well. If there's anything that I've seriously flaked on that's been an inconvenience, please let me know!

Also, have I had Natalie being too soft and nice? ICly speaking, she's been wanting to try to be a less miserable person, but I'm thinking that I'm not really reaching out and grasping at those chances to have her be the lousy person that she really is deep down. I'll be trying to be more conscious if it going forward, but has it been noticeable at all?
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[personal profile] spare_parts 2014-10-14 05:17 am (UTC)(link)
Dana
Characters:
Dist [personal profile] spare_parts
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?:
Specifically I would like input from anybody familiar with Dist's canon, Tales of the Abyss. He's getting pretty far from his behavior in canon and I want to make sure that the changes are realistic and make sense.

The slow posting and the only-playing-within-shipping are things I'm working on, and I'm sorry about that. ^^;