HMD The Fourth

[thelostmods]

You know what time it is, my friends; HMD MEME! The most dreaded meme in the lands of rp, but worry not, it is 100% optional here.

If you feel like you want clearer directions on what to do or if you're worried about your character's progress, please feel free to post here!


<b>YOUR NAME HERE</b> <b>Characters:</b> YOUR CHARACTERS NAME <user name="username"> ANOTHER CHARACTERS NAME? <user name="username"> <u>Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?:</u>

Comments

[amourtician]

lenz
Characters:
Jay Zimin amourtician
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: the usual! how am i doing? am i fucking up in any obvious ways? is jay consistent and interesting? how does he come off?

and: am i handling his issues with relationships all right? he's an abuse survivor and i kind of hope i'm not fucking up depicting either that or handling his awful past when it does come up.

[pythianjudgment]

Michi
Characters:
Terezi Pyrope pythianjudgment

Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Anything at all that you think I'm having problems with? I know I've been slow over the holidays, but I'm trying to pick that back up again. I'm almost back on track, as far as I can tell? Otherwise, just the usual stuff. Is her voice okay? Is she too serious? Too logical? Too silly? Speak now or forever hold your peace.

[kingroadie]

Sora
Characters:
Eddie Nein-Riggs kingroadie
Lili Zanotto justshutupraz
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Are my character voices still clear? Did I handle Eddie's plot about his dad well? Is Lili present enough? Is she too bratty? Not bratty enough? Has my grammar or spelling gone down hill again? I'm always happy to discuss that stuff! People are free to comment on my modding as well if there are any issues I need to be aware of!

[spitefulvitae]

Lampy
Characters:
Natalie Waters spitefulvitae
Nyanpire nyanpire
Kain Highwind ajealouswind
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: All the usual stuff! How are my character's voices, are they consistent, are they still fun to play with, have I been typoing all over the place? Also, I hope my activity level has been satisfactory! Also also, I hope that the plotting I've been getting up to hasn't been too self-indulgent or anything?

I've got HMDs at all of my journals, if you'd like to drop it there, too.

[kingroadie]

I can definitely say, you keep Natalie this nice- creepy level. It is so nice to see a vampire who is genuinely creepy whilst retaining human like qualities. Verry radical, keep on rocking!

[spitefulvitae]

Thank you! :D I'm happy to hear that there's a satisfactory level of creepy being delivered!

[preuxchevalier]

Terri
Characters:
Bertie Wooster preuxchevalier
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: The typical along with are Bertie's antics dominating things too much? I can certainly tone them down if I've been too active as of late.

[scruffy_mcjackass]

Thalia
Characters:
Dustin Silver scruffy_mcjackass

Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: I just got here! Please tell me if I've made Dustin's introduction well, if he's integrated the way you expected, how he's handled the whole scanning and genius thing because that can be tricky and I always worry--anything else you can think of, really!

If you'd rather not post it here, Dustin has a personal HMD with screened comments.

[kingroadie]

This doesn't even count as crit, lawdy. JUST- I really love Dustin being a grouchy genius. You play the grump factor really well without over doing or underplaying it. You have a great balance on it that I enjoy. I think you do super smart genius nerd pretty dang well too. Keep trucking, I'm looking forward to seeing more of Dustin!

[chalicejoker]

Airdra
Characters:
Hajime Aikawa chalicejoker
Anything else?/what are you looking for crit wise?: Nothing beyond the usual wondering if I'm doing it right, if there's anything I can improve on, that sort of thing.